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I'm in the mood for some daddy!Victus and baby!Tarquin. Please forgive my family spam!

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An insistent chirp rang out in front of Victus and he slowly lowered his datapad, just enough that he could see his four-year-old son gleaming up at him with bright olive eyes. He sighed, dropping the datapad onto the end table and turning his full attention to Tarquin. "What is it?"

Tarquin took the discarded datapad as his signal to climb up into the armchair and settle into his father's lap. "Story."

"I just told you one yesterday," Victus muttered, laying a hand heavily on top of the boy's head.

"That was a long time ago!" Tarquin protested, clasping his tiny talons around his father's wrist. "Tell me one today!"

Victus hummed softly, pretending to debate over Tarquin's request. After a pregnant pause, he said, "Fine. What kind of story?" Tarquin's eyes lit up, his little mandibles flaring. "And don't say war stories."

"War stories," the boy chirped.

Victus groaned, tilting his head back over the edge of the chair. "No, Tarquin."

"Daaad," Tarquin whined, reaching up and grabbing at the tips of Victus' mandibles, "I wanna hear a war story."

"No," Victus said, his trapped mandibles causing his voice to flange strangely.

"Just one?" Tarquin pleaded. His browplates twitched up into a pitiful puppy-face. "Please?"

"I remember someone getting scared the last time I told one," Victus deadpanned.

"I won't get scared," Tarquin peeped, tugging his dad's mandibles downward into an exaggerated frown. "Promise!"

Victus pondered over it for a moment, recalling how horribly the last story time featuring a tale from battle had gone. Tarquin had had to sleep with the door open, lights on, for a full week. Of course, Victus had gotten a little overzealous in his retelling and dropped some inappropriately gory details. It was sometimes hard for him to remember that he was talking to his young son and not his fresh-from-basic soldiers.

He decided, finally, that one story wouldn't hurt, as long as he could keep it tame. "All right. Only one, though."

"Yes!" Tarquin hissed in cheer, pulling Victus' mandibles out to the sides. He quickly released the thin plates and settled back against the arm of the chair, eyes wide and intent.

Victus gave a thoughtful rumble, picking through his mental file of memorable battles. "Let's see... once, before I ever became a general, my squad was sent to take down some particularly nasty krogan mercs on the planet Invictus."

"Did they name the planet after you, Dad?" Tarquin gasped.

"What?" Victus retorted. "No, that's Invictus, son."

"Sounds the same to me," Tarquin argued.

"Anyway," Victus said, chuckling as he continued, "there was a small group of us, maybe nine or ten strong. We set up a fake weapons deal so that the krogan would drop their guard and we were given the coordinates of their base to make the exchange. But," his voice grew a little louder, "when we got there, they had already figured out what was going on and they took out one of my men as soon as we walked in. Then--"

"Dad," Tarquin interrupted, "you aren't telling it right!"

Victus scoffed, "I'm telling you what happened."

"You have to make the gun sounds!" the boy huffed.

"It's just fine without the gun sounds," Victus defended.

Tarquin crossed his arms with gusto, his tiny mandible flapping angrily. "It's dumb without the gun sounds."

"Did I even say they were using guns?" Victus snapped. "It could've been biotics."

"Biotics are stupid," Tarquin said. "They were using guns."

Victus sighed, "Do you want to tell this story?"

"No," the boy pouted, "but you have to make the gun sounds."

"Oh, Spirits help me..." Victus grumbled. "Fine. Gun sounds. We walk in and as soon as we do, POW, one of my men gets shot down. Suddenly, we're all scrambling for cover, drawing our own guns." He threw his hands up to aim an invisible rifle. "I came out of cover and, BANG BANG BANG, took out a krogan who was hanging off by himself. Then, I hear this noise behind me, and--"

"What noise?" Tarquin cut.

"Wha--I don't know," Victus sputtered. "Uh, bssst. However it sounded, I knew it was someone letting down a tactical cloak, an enemy. It was an asari commando, and she was about to hit me full in this face with her biotics. So--" When Tarquin gave an irritated trill, prompting for sound effects, Victus added, "So she came at me and whooosh, charged up her biotics."

"Did she hit you?"

"No, I turned around quick enough and, BANG--" Victus stopped. He'd almost done it, given too many details, particularly about bullets shredding through that commando's chest. Spirits, this story was a bad idea.

"And...?" Tarquin urged.

"I shot her and she fell and I moved on," Victus ended quickly. He continued the story, censoring as much gore from it as possible. In retrospect, this had been a terrible mission to talk about. Several men had lost limbs that night, and that wasn't even accounting for the mercs injuries. He finished the tale as cleanly as possible, reminding himself, for about the fiftieth time, that this was why he never spoke of his battles.

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Night fell and Tarquin settled into bed without much fuss. Victus waited, gave the boy a good hour to fall asleep, before he even attempted to turn in himself. Then, door locks secure and lights off, Victus dragged himself to bed, nestling in face down and drifting into sleep.

Shortly after, he was alerted by a small form crawling up onto the foot of the bed. The mattress shifted, only slightly, as the intruder padded softly up the the headboard and settled beside Victus' shoulder. The general was fully awakened by his son's tiny claws scratching at the plates of his bicep.

"Dad?" Tarquin peeped quietly. When he got no response, he insisted, "Dad."

"Boy," Victus grumbled into his pillow. "I sleep three hours a night, and you manage to... What's wrong?"

"Dad, I'm scared," the boy whimpered.

"Scared of what?" Victus groaned, turning toward Tarquin and propping up on one elbow .

"What if they're in there?" Tarquin squeaked. "What if they're in my room?"

"Who?"

"The commandos," Tarquin said.

"Did you see any commandos?" Victus reasoned.

Tarquin plucked at the bedsheets nervously. "What if they have cloaks?"

Victus sighed, bringing up his opposite hand to rub Tarquin's back. "They make sounds, like a buzzing."

"What if I can't hear it?" the boy wailed, his subharmonics warping.

"You see, this is why--" Victus cut himself off. Tarquin had only wanted a story; he hadn't considered that it might scare him. Victus exhaled, knowing he couldn't scold the boy. Instead, he turned to adjust his pillows and settled backwards into them, careful with the placement of his crest. "I can hear them. If anyone tries to walk in here with a cloak, I'll know it." He pulled Tarquin closer, giving a comforting hum.

With an excited trill, Tarquin lifted the edge of the sheets and dove under. After a few seconds of wiggling, his head emerged and he burrowed into Victus' shoulder. The boy gave a sleepy purr, his mandibles flicking as he fought against sleep. "Nnn... night, Dad."

Victus returned the sound, shifting the arm Tarquin was laying on until it could freely move. He lifted the arm and tucked it around the boy. "Night."
Very short, but this idea has been floating around for a while now. There's a sketch to go with it, but I'll have to scan it in tomorrow.
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Ashynioki Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012
This is sooo adorable! I love the way you describe little Tarquin's behavior. ^_^
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bbb35 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012
Daawwww!! :iconawwplz:
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greenmamba5 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:love:
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bbb35 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012
Vanessa: i understand that Victus was close to his Dad, but I don't understand the laying in bed with him....I never did that, thou mostly because I just laid in bed with one of my Older Brothers.

:iconfemshepplz: You were never a lonely child, frightened after a nightmare, crying for your parents?

Vanessa: (deadpan) I have Four-Hundred and Fifty-Six Brothers and Sisters takign care of me.

:iconliaraplz: My Goodness...no wonder you never were close to your parents.

Vanessa: I loved them, they took care of me and my siblings, but I really bonded with my Eight brothers and Elven Sisters more closely.
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Calsa95 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Student General Artist
This was adorable! ^^ I love how Victus is as a dad.
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greenmamba5 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! I think he'd be a great dad :3
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Raiderecho Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
aww so cute i wish to hear about tarquin's mama no one ever mentions any mates of Victus
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greenmamba5 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I was always under the impression that she wasn't in the picture. I, personally, think she died in childbirth, but I've read an excellent fic where she and Victus mated for political reasons only. They were only together so Victus could carry on his bloodline, and she left after Tarquin was born.
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Raiderecho Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hmmm so sad
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Plantress Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Student Writer
This is adorable! I love how Tarquin insisted on the gun noises! XD Of course he would want to hear all his dad's old war stories.
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greenmamba5 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
War stories are only good with full sound effects!

I could see Victus getting carried away with his retellings though (because he's used to talking with his hardened soldiers).

Ha, just had a thought: what if he tried to censor all the gory words with kid-friendly words.

"...and he started gushing... rainbows... all over the battlefield...."

"Dad, that doesn't make any sense."

"It was a strange day, son."
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Plantress Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Student Writer
XD I can so see Victus censoring words like that! 'Rainbows!' Of course Tarquin would probably see through that when he gets older.

...I can picture something like that becoming one of those family in-jokes that no one else understands.
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greenmamba5 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe a grown up Tarquin would drop the word to Victus' men. "So, yeah, you should ask him about the rainbows." He'd later get a message from his dad like, "Son, what in spirits name did you tell them? They won't stop asking about rainbows!"
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Turian-Lover Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AAAWWWW, I love Victus so much as a daddy. Makes it even sadder now when I think about Tarquin's death in ME3 :( This was wonderful!
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greenmamba5 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Me too... I can't get over this family! I always get so sad after Tarquin's sacrifice... Victus has to play it off like he's not affected. I always imagine that he locks himself in the lounge after Shep talks to him and doesn't leave until Garrus drags him out.
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Turian-Lover Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Poor Victus :(
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illusionsfire76 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This was adorable!!!! So cute!!! LOVE IT! Nice job :D
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greenmamba5 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
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ToaOrka Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hrmph, I wish my dad made gun noises in the stories he told me...
Seriously though, this is too adorable! Can't wait to see the picture that goes with it! :dummy:
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greenmamba5 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't think Victus had much of a choice. Baby Tarquin is serious business!

Craaap, I forgot to scan it! Have to do that after work tomorrow...
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ToaOrka Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Why you no scan it? :iconwhyyounoplz:
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kdwalbring Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Dawww!!! Just what I needed before a long day of classes. Looking forward to your next chapter, too.
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greenmamba5 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hope your classes went well!
I'll be working on the next chapter later tonight. Not sure yet when it'll be out.
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kdwalbring Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Take your time. It's always worth the wait :) Accidently took a grad level class, but my head hasn't exploded yet (I call that a victory)
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kdwalbring Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
This is only my second year in college. Everyone else in the class is on their second PHDs and two of them have children. Then theirs me, whose not old enough to drink (not that it matter, took a vow of sobriety).
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greenmamba5 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Good job lol
I'm in a freshman level class and it's glorious!
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Duffy-Sama Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
...reading people write about cute things makes me want to write/draw cute things too. =w= ALL THE FEELS!!!! <3333

Loved it when Tarquin started tugging on his Daddy's mandibles to get his story. I'm pretty sure I'd of done the same thing if I was a kid. XD ...or even now if a turian would let me. >w>;
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greenmamba5 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Do it, then! Spread the feels~

It's probably the easiest way to get somebody's attention! Plus, they're so cool. I just wanna touch 'em!
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Duffy-Sama Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
AH WILL~ <333 I've already started planning some cuteness and such. Just need to write them down and get started on them! OwO~:heart:

Oh yes, if pulling hair/ears/noses gets a human's attention, the mandibles are the next best thing~ X3 ...wonder why Shepard never thought to do that whenever trying to talk to Garrus all those times? O3o
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greenmamba5 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Watching you now so I can catch the cuteness when you post it! :3

"Can it wait a bit, I'm in the mid-- *mandible jerk* Shepar' wha're you doin'??? O_o"
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Duffy-Sama Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh wow, thanks! QwQ *hugs* I'll be sure to make it extra cute~ <333 ...just don't send me your dentist's bill if you end up losing any teeth. XD

LOL!!!! XDDD ...that's it, I'm gonna add that in some story somewhere. XD Or it'd even make an amusing comic too. O3O
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divadevi8808 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
:squee: Daddy Victus!!! Baby Tarquin!!!:squee:

"It's dumb without the gun sounds." pure gold.
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greenmamba5 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
He's tellin' it like it is!
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LOLZpersonok Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Cute :D
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greenmamba5 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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LOLZpersonok Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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LadyIlona1984 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nicely done. :)
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greenmamba5 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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LadyIlona1984 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No prob. :)
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